This is probably not that good seeing as its a rant of sorts. Thoughts?

The Villian





A spot on my windsheild


a festering wound


seeping through the bandages


down to to the deepest part of me





Thats what you are


a f**king speck on my mirror


that I can't rub away


all of the solvent in the world


couldn't dissolve your presence





your presence that seeks to destroy


and I can smell your intentions


from a million miles away


they smell like sulfur and burning paper


acrid and disgusting


it lingers in the roof of my mouth





You don't scare me,


you festering wound


your pus will crust over.


disintegrate.


and fall away





we'll be the victors at the end of the day.This is probably not that good seeing as its a rant of sorts. Thoughts?
every heroin needs a villainThis is probably not that good seeing as its a rant of sorts. Thoughts?
I am looking in the mirror.
I didn't know you knew me.





You are right. It's not that good and it is a rant.
Poetry is expressing yourself so I think you did a good. Better to let your emotions off through poetry than to keep them deep inside. I like it but I hating thinking about the truth behind it so try to work things out life doesn't have to be as hard as we make it. Anyway if you ever want to read some of my poetry look me up on http://www.unitedworldpoets.com/.